Bendoro
Raden mas ontowiryo is the original name of pangeran diponegoro. His mother is
R.A Mangkarawati who is coming From pacitan. His mother is not a queen but only
a mistress. This is the reason why pangeran di ponegoro is very uninterested to
live in Tegalrejo, in his grandmother’s house. Pangeran Diponegoro is very open
to all so It makes many people give their sympathy and support to him.
Text Organization
BalasHapusa. score : 0, no title
b. structure : 0, not complete, only orientation
c. topic of orientation: 1,
d. event(s) : 0, no event(s), writer only gives orientation
e. elaboration : 1, yes there is supporting sentences
Content
score : 1, idea is incomplete
Grammar
a. past tense
score : 1, more than 4 mistakes, the writer does not use past tense
b. linking words
score : 1, the writer only uses 1 linking word
Punctuation
a. Punctuation
score : 3
b. Spelling
score : 1, 4 mistakes
- Bendoro Raden mas ontowiryo --> Bendoro Raden Mas Ontowiryo
- pangeran diponegoro --> Pangeran Diponegoro
name should be written in capital letter
- From --> from
- It --> it, only written in capital when it starts a sentence.
Style
score : 3
-Pangeran Diponegoro is very open to all --> you may use, Pangeran Diponegoro was an open minded person.